Sonntag, 24. Juni 2007
some...
something loved, ripped from a superficial grasp on reality, the illusion is gone, nothing is left with me but a stiring silence, a gaping hole, blinding light, burning fright, useless plight... for mercyuntitled by methis was inspired by random thought... I dont know where it came from but its there never the lessI might be writing a lil more poetry... but I might not... either way
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i like it.u are good with words dustin. all you need is practice and a little structure.it is amazing what structure can do for a poem :)
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